Making your readers see your character is in pain is pertinent to your readers perception of your story. So use words like ache, throb, distress, flare for physical pain. If your character is in emotional pain show that in your writing. One way is describing what your characters are physically doing like if angry, slamming doors, trembling, or soft and exaggerated sighs

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